Name: Forever and Always
Author: H. T. Night
Published: June 8, 2011 by lulu.com
Purchased: January 25, 2012, free, now $0.99 box set and individually on Kindle.
I had just started the book and I just had to write this comment in my journal. At the end of the last book, Josiah had just told his girl that she was his world and almost as soon as he gets on the plane, he starts majorly flirting with the woman sitting next to him. It even says that he briefly forgets about her. Wow, some love story.
I couldn’t even finish this book, it was so boring and slow. Also, again with the outrageously choppy sentences and giving the readers more unnecessary play-by-play.
I can’t really believe that I even finished these books in 2012, of course I wasn’t reviewing books back then so I wasn’t really paying attention
The plot is a great idea, really it is but the execution just kills it. I’m sure if the writing had been much better, maybe proofread and edited, the book would have been amazing. The way it’s written wouldn’t even get a passing grade for a middle school paper.
It’s amazing what you learn about yourself when you go back and read a book you haven’t read in years. I’m actually going to make another post about that so, stick around.
Thank you for reading my review.